Makes me feel like a badass, and gives me a slight Tristam vibe with the sine in the transition.
Makes me feel like a badass, and gives me a slight Tristam vibe with the sine in the transition.
You're on the right track, just try adding a little more melody and make it higher pitched melodies too, right now, you only have a saw sub-bass and a main beat, which is two thirds of what you need, now you just need a main melody for it as well. You could also go a little lighter on the Hi-Hats too, and leave more space for melodies, Vocal one shots, Vocal Takes, or even a transition using the sub-bass you created. All in all it's good, but you definitely got a little ways to go. Keep trying and you'll get there soon, I'll be looking forward to more releases from you 👍
(P.S, sorry for only three stars, it'd be higher with a main melody.)
-ElectroFire
Amazing song, love the low+high vocal mix, it really makes it powerful. All I suggest is turn the reverb down a bit, and give the lead synths some room to really pack a punch. 👍
Ooooooooohhhh I love how it's more Chiptune, and the Square + Sine mix is amazing. The reverb after the drop during the calm part is amazing too, it adds to the song. All together the song gave me chills, keep it up 💖
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