Makes me feel like a badass, and gives me a slight Tristam vibe with the sine in the transition.

You're on the right track, just try adding a little more melody and make it higher pitched melodies too, right now, you only have a saw sub-bass and a main beat, which is two thirds of what you need, now you just need a main melody for it as well. You could also go a little lighter on the Hi-Hats too, and leave more space for melodies, Vocal one shots, Vocal Takes, or even a transition using the sub-bass you created. All in all it's good, but you definitely got a little ways to go. Keep trying and you'll get there soon, I'll be looking forward to more releases from you 👍

(P.S, sorry for only three stars, it'd be higher with a main melody.)

-ElectroFire